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"But
how do you do it?" That was a question I was asked by a prospective
client the other day. While he was a good writer, he was frustrated
with trying to use the data he'd collected on his customers to make
an emotional connection. If you know where to look, you can easily
find clues about what people are feeling. Once you discover that,
making the connection is simple. Let's use weight loss as an example.
Evaluate Your Customers
While some things about your customers may be obvious,
you'll get much better results if you actually evaluate or research
your visitors in some way. You can perform exit surveys on your
site, send out an email asking customers to participate in a quick
study or use other means to collect data.
Always read your customer feedback with care. Never
discount information because it might not have been what you were
expecting. Honest, constructive criticism can open the door to new
ideas, products and/or services. Also, study your testimonials.
Is there a trend? Do most people compliment you on the same thing(s)?
If so, those elements are evidently very important to them.
Research your customers' lifestyles as well as basic
demographics. In other words, knowing that your visitors are primarily
women between the ages of 50-60 who make over $60,000 per year is
nice. However, it does not reveal that they are approaching retirement
and trying to save money wherever they can for fear of not having
enough. It also doesn't tell you that their doctors recently told
these women their cholesterol and blood pressure were getting too
high (probably due to steady weight gain year after year).
Put Yourself in Their Shoes
Once you've collected the data, put yourself in
your customers' shoes for a day. Don't just read over the findings
in a methodical manner: actually think about what the findings mean.
Go back to the paragraph above. Let's dissect those bits of information.
…women
between the ages of 50-60 who make over $60,000 per year, approaching
retirement and trying to save money wherever they can for fear
of not having enough, doctors recently told them their cholesterol
and blood pressure were getting too high (probably due to steady
weight gain year after year).
What if you were in this situation? What would you
be feeling? "Just great! Now all that extra money I've been
trying to put toward paying down the mortgage is going to have to
go to some expensive weight loss program. Or worse yet… I'll
have to go on high-priced medication forever and put up with all
those quirky side effects. Most of the time, months later, the news
reports always say these pills don't work or can possibly kill you!
I don't want that. My only other choice is to try to lose the weight.
I don't know how to do it alone, so I'm going to have to join a
program. That's just perfect. Approaching retirement and I'm going
to be a slave to the calorie counter. Good grief!"
Not a good situation, is it? You don't really want
to find or participate in a weight loss program, do you? So, for
someone in this state of mind, what could the copy say that would
be persuasive and would speak to them on their level?
Asking questions is a good approach. "Looking
for a weight loss program that fits your hectic lifestyle?"
"Need an affordable weight loss program that produces quick
results?" Think of questions that reflect their state of mind
and that you can answer positively.
In addition, you can list features of your product
or service that would appeal to a person in the mindset outlined
above.
- It's
easy.
- Everything
is prepackaged and precounted.
- It's
affordable.
- You
get quick results.
- Your
health improves as you lose weight.
- It
gives you more energy.
- Introductory
program saves you money.
- Others
have seen blood pressure and cholesterol drop within just 4 weeks.
There are lots more. All these features could be
worked into your copy along with the appropriate benefits and end
results to clearly show these women that your weight loss program
is right for them. Whatever you do, don't forget the vital step
of adding benefits and end results to these features!
You could even create a "pre-retirement"
package designed to help lower blood pressure and cholesterol and
boost energy along with losing weight, so women have better health
and more get-up-and-go for the years to come. Give it a discounted
price and toss in some supplements and you've got a tailored package
these women would probably love.
The
whole idea is to learn the who, what, when, where and why of your
site visitors. Once you understand what emotional state visitors
are in and which emotional level they are on, you'll be able to
create copy that is highly effective.
Learn to write
emotionally driven SEO copywriting with Karon's Copywriting Course
at http://www.copywritingcourse.com.
Read Karon's copywriting blog at http://www.marketingwords.com/blog.
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