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It
really gets my blood pressure up. SEO copywriting has begun to get
a poor reputation all due to carelessness. How so? Because too many
people claim to know what they are doing. In reality, they simply
shove keywords into copy without any concern for how the copy flows.
Copy that sounds mechanical or stiff is a sure sign that an amateur
writer has had his/her hands in things.
When you write SEO copy, you should take the time
to find out what works and what doesn't. There are two mistakes
almost every amateur search engine copywriter makes. Let's take
a look at each one.
#1 - The List
Let's say you visit the home page of a website that
sells beauty supplies. As you read the copy, you keep coming across
a string of items: hair salon supplies, hair salon equipment and
professional manicure tables. The copy reads something like this:
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The
Best Selection of Hair Salon Supplies, Hair Salon Equipment and
Professional Manicure Tables On the Internet
When
you're shopping for hair salon supplies, hair salon equipment
and professional manicure tables, you need a vendor who offers
great selection as well as great service. Because buying hair
salon supplies, hair salon equipment and professional manicure
tables can be an expensive venture, you also want a company that
delivers the lowest price.
Trust
ABC Beauty Supply to bring you the widest selection of hair salon
supplies, hair salon equipment and professional manicure tables
in stock every day. Orders are shipped within 24 hours and - for
all hair salon supplies, hair salon equipment and professional
manicure tables orders over $100 - shipping is absolutely free!
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Do you see how that flows (or doesn't flow) when
you use all your keyphrases in a row every single time? One time,
sure. That's fine. Even twice, depending on the length of your copy.
But to put all your keyphrases in a list and use them every time
you have the smallest opportunity is just far too repetitive. What
do you do instead?
Discuss each one in its own section. Talk about
the various types of hair salon supplies. Review the reasons your
hair salon equipment is better than that sold by others. Or even
list the features and benefits of the line of manicure tables you
offer.
#2 - Substituting Keywords for Generic Terms
This technique (just like the one above) is perfectly
fine IF you use it in moderation. However, to replace every instance
of a generic term with a keyphrase will cause your copy to sound
downright silly. Let's have a look at an example from a Web design
site.
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New
Orleans Web Design
Our
New Orleans Web design firm offers a high level of creativity
to businesses located in the general area. Our New Orleans
Web design styles are never made from templates. Each New
Orleans Web design is a custom creation just for your site.
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If you walked into a Web design company's office
and the employees began to talk like that copy is written, you'd
most likely think they were on drugs! So why in the world would
you write your site copy that way? The reason is because most amateurs
mistakenly think they can't write for both the search engines and
the site visitors. I'm delighted to say they are wrong! You can
most certainly write for both with great success.
Try this:
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Progressive,
creative, upbeat. Those are phrases that best describe many online
businesses based in New Orleans. Web design for your organization
should match your style. Never created from templates, the site
designs you’ll receive will be truly reflective of your
corporate personality. Because we work exclusively with companies
located in or near New Orleans, Web designs retain that Big Easy
feel.
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Did you see it? The phrase was broken up using punctuation.
That won't hurt your rankings one bit, but it will make your copy
sound a LOT better.
These are not all the mistakes. I wish they were!
But most of the mistakes made by amateur writers can be fixed using
one simple test. Read it out loud. If the copy sounds ridiculous
to you when you read it out loud, it is going to sound equally ridiculous
to a site visitor.
Take your time. Learn the ins and outs of SEO copywriting
before you begin to create the text for your (or your clients’)
pages. Then you can rest assured that your copy will convert better
while it contributes to your high rankings.
Copy
not getting results? Learn to write SEO copy that impresses the
engines and your visitors at http://www.copywritingcourse.com.
Be sure to also check out Karon’s latest e-report “How
To Increase Keyword Saturation (Without Destroying the Flow of Your
Copy)” at http://www.copywritingcourse.com/keyword.
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