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Copywriting
Makeover: Search Engine-Friendly
Can Also Mean Visitor-Friendly
By Karon Thackston © 2005
www.copywritingcourse.com
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When it comes
to search engine optimization, copywriting plays a big role. You
want to have excellent copy that appeals to both your visitors and
the engines in order to create pages that will rank highly. However,
sometimes there can be potential problems with fitting copy into
certain types of sites. Due to space constraints, page layout requirements
or other issues, some site owners hesitate to include SEO copy thinking
it will detract from the visitor's experience. It won't if you do
it right!
Gigmasters.com
is a database site that allows visitors to search for any number
of entertainment options then book them directly from the site.
They segmented their target audience by the events visitors would
book entertainment for (i.e., wedding entertainment, birthday party
entertainment, etc.) Pages were then created for each entertainment
type.
The
Problems
Gigmasters.com
wasn't ranking highly for its keyphrases on a number of pages. In
fact, for the page we're focusing on in this article (see the original
copy here: http://www.copywritingcourse.com/gigmasters-original-wedding.pdf),
Gigmasters.com wasn't ranking in the top 50.
The page desperately
needed more copy. The concern was that visitors would be distracted
by the addition of more text. After all, customers who come to a
site to book entertainment are going to focus on the information
in each performer's bio… not the copy on the category page,
right? As we found out, this was not at all true.
In addition
to quantity (word count), the page also needed quality. The one
paragraph of copy that was on the page was rough and sounded awkward.
The
Solutions
Writing copy
that appeals to the site visitors and the search engines should
be the goal of every SEO copywriter. You never want to sacrifice
one for the other. However, I knew that adding a long block of copy
right in the middle of the page would not be using good judgment.
Good thing nobody ever said all your copy had to be in one place!
By breaking
the copy up and adding short blips under each section of the page,
we were able to include enough text to support the chosen keyphrases.
At the same time, we were able to help visitors make the best choices
for their wedding entertainment.
The
Rewrite
For this particular
page, the target customer was someone in need of wedding entertainment.
The visitor might be a bride or the mother of a bride looking for
a wedding band (a wedding music band, that is), a DJ or some other
form of wedding reception music. Most often the site visitor was
a bride, however.
I never want
to include copy strictly for SEO purposes if possible. The copy
should always have a dual purpose: to help the visitor and to boost
rankings. To accomplish this with Gigmasters.com, the introductory
paragraph of copy spoke directly to the bride-to-be. It gave her
the feeling that Gigmasters.com understood how important the music
for her wedding and reception are.
Under each music
classification, the bride was given ideas or suggestions. Statements
like, "The gentle melodies played by a harpist or flutist during
the prelude to your ceremony can add an air of distinction"
and " Do you want your guests to dance? Consider a Latin band
or swing band to pick up the beat" prompted visitors to think
through their selections and evaluate all their options before deciding.
Each section
of copy used at least one primary keyphrase to boost support of
those terms with the engines. The copy was carefully written so
as not to sound forced or stiff when including search terms.
The
Results
You can view
the updated copy here: http://www.copywritingcourse.com/gigmasters-updated-wedding.pdf.
What happened after the changes? Within just a few weeks the page
began to rise in rankings dramatically! Currently, the page has
great rankings with various engines for various keyphrases - several
in the top 10 with Google and Yahoo.
And
conversions? They are holding steady if not increased some according
to site partner Kevin Kinyon, further proving that search engine
copywriting can be helpful to real people, too.
Copy not getting
results? Learn to write SEO copy that impresses the engines and
your visitors at http://www.copywritingcourse.com.
Be sure to also check out Karon’s latest e-report “How
To Increase Keyword Saturation (Without Destroying the Flow of Your
Copy)” at http://www.copywritingcourse.com/keyword.
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